Envy.

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Envy.

While i sit here ina small vast of emptiness of this room.
i lay here in the cosp of insanity,
while the black and white of my mind meld into a subtle grey,
staring out as the wind passes by,
i am overcomed with envy.
A unlimited choice of life without bounds,
no boarders,
unlimited possibilities that sucome to my will
and make it to what i wish,
a lone heart, a hollow shell of what was my former being,
while i sit here -n- stare away in my envious glance

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knight4696 commented on Envy.

01-26-2011

Charlex .. A deep internalization you have penned her pal. I emote the same way .. Life is confusing at best and we must accept the good with the bad, the joy with the sadness, etc ... Envy is just another of our unwanted emotions that we all experience at one time or another .. just gotta be thankful for what we do have ,, and not concentrate on the have nots. Be well friend. Ken

thecross commented on Envy.

12-30-2010

An introvert type of being is a strong one and one that leaves extroverts staring in awe, good write

sk8erpoet commented on Envy.

07-28-2010

love it.............................my kind of poem...i can relate to it....great write .....sk8

ginga commented on Envy.

04-26-2010

charlex, Somehow the subject of the poem feels like an introvert to me. Lonely, frustrated, and deep in thought. A creative piece that makes one ponder. ginga

Dano commented on Envy.

04-19-2010

"while the black and white of my mind meld into a subtle grey"... the overwhelming feeling of being lonely the emptiness of being... nicely written

charlex

05/30/2010

thank you, Dano.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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