Ego

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    Ego

    Among the empty dry eyes is a pitifull disguise,
    glowing with all your pain, acting so big and vain.
    With the words you now flow,I see nothing more than a show.
    Don't ever think that you cannot shrink, because
    we all rise and we all fall, let your ego know it can all be
    over in just one blink

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    LaBOOSH commented on Ego

    07-29-2009

    abrupt and to the point. Cut the ego or at least keep yourself in control of it. Don't let it say something you may regret b/c tomorrow is not promised, as they say.
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    Jedi4Jesus commented on Ego

    06-17-2009

    As the good book says, Pride goes before a fall. Good poem.
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    mykhail commented on Ego

    02-18-2009

    Again, very deep, insightful ... the EGO can end it all for us! Loved it!
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    bforibus commented on Ego

    02-18-2009

    mmmm I really loved this one. im that wolf in sheeps clothing. this spoke to me. i gave it a 10
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    cottonluv commented on Ego

    02-18-2009

    i get it and i like it.short but speaks a powerful msg.good work
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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