eclipse

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  • Solar Eclipse

    eclipse

    Oh dear I saw the eclipse
    when the sun and moon seemed touching their lips
    and our green earth
    becoming dark streaks.

    some say the demon is gobbling the sun,
    some say the sunami is waiting for its turn.
    while others say it is a bad omen for everyone.
    but I say the eclipse was a beautiful scene
    which everyone has seen
    and
    I still believe the nature is showing its beauty on the earth, the sky and sea and it is there for ever to be
    -yes the eclipse
    this is what is running on everyone's lips and next time I will give you more tips for the
    beautiful eclipse.

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    xntric commented on eclipse

    07-29-2009

    Very beautiful. Perhaps the sun and moon wanted for just a moment in time to touch and be one, like forbidden love.
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