dreams

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    dreams

     A lost young petal
    wondering souls
    i see the dream you seek
    follow me please,if you dare
    the dream is coming
    for you and me
    i return by yourside
    with a heart in my hand
    its like a bright fire dancing
    to the slow music turning
    my heart as smooth as ivory
    has turned to a lonley,sulfur
    i retire my heart now to you,
    love me because i love you

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    poetrylova224 commented on dreams

    08-23-2010

    This poem is really good, and a few months ago i totally would have related to it.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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