dragonflies

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  • Lost Love

    dragonflies

     Like dragonflies on the breeze,
    the sound of the wind in the trees,
    love that is lost and can't be found,
    a heart that lies broken on the ground.

    like the face of yours that is not around
    just like the love that cannot be found,
    I look around and you're not there
    just like the clothes you used to wear.


    This heart of mine,broken and blue
    just like the song of love so true.

    So I muster the strength to say goodbye,
    just like the wings of an eagle,fly

    Love that is lost still can never die
    I look around and wonder why?

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    ListninEar commented on dragonflies

    10-12-2009

    I like it, sweet and very touching. Did you mean to have the spaces between some of the verses?
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    smoothdame commented on dragonflies

    09-14-2009

    great poem I love the way it rhymes and the fact that it talks about love being unable to die even if it is lost. I really believe that this is true. good job.
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    hightower92277

    09/14/2009

    thanks so much for commenting on all 3 of my poems.Im happy you liked them all! just like everyone else's,they come from my heart and where my life is at right now. again thanks!

    CasimirJash commented on dragonflies

    09-14-2009

    great poem, I love the rhyme very perfect, and well written, you're right love that is lost will never die, because those are memories.
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    hightower92277

    09/14/2009

    thanks for commenting on my poem, Im glad you liked it!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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