Don't forget about Me

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    143...2345 SB...and a day!

    Don't forget about Me

     Like two ships on a dark stormy night
    struck by the same waive and sinking with fright
    Now sharing a lifeboat meant to hold only one
    if either of us could be saved, it's better than none
    So take my vest and I'll jump into the sea
    should you get rescued, Please don't forget about Me!

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    omari commented on Don't forget about Me

    01-23-2010

    Your attempt to convey so much in so little words is well-done in this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed " better than none". I look forward to reading all of your poems.
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    sillymekaren

    01/23/2010

    Thank You!

    twise commented on Don't forget about Me

    01-21-2010

    I love this poem, you are very talented. All of your work is wonderful, maybe you should break those notebooks out of hiding and share some of your earlier work. You have a talent that many people, such as me, take much enjoyment in indulging in. Keep writing, you are wonderful at it :)
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    sillymekaren

    01/23/2010

    Thanx so much for the comment, and such Big compliment coming from someone with as much talent as you have...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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