Do...

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Past love, now best friend. And even with a new boyfriend, we will always be able to talk about anything, everything, and will always have each other!

Do...

I want to remove all your pain,
Heal the scares of your past,
I know what you've done,
I've been there myself,
Yet you don’t believe,
You have yet to see,
That I want to remove you distrust,
I’ll remove all the hurt and blame,
Through all the hate and suffering,
Not a one of us is perfect,
No one lives without sin,
To make you forget your suffering,
To show you true happiness,
Show I know no on is to blame,
I will open up,
And show you all my pain,
Show you that I’ve done the same thing,
Tell you you’re not wrong,
For having fought to live,
For making it through,
No matter,
What we had to do…

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harmony74 commented on Do...

07-31-2009

Very caring! As if a friend wrote it to me :) "for having fought to live" is relatable to my past! I was always in the "fight mode..Sometimes i still think i live that way..Dukes up and ready to go..Not good..Thank U God for his wisdom and showing us what we need and what we need to do with his strenth helping us along the way..

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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