Do not Challenge me For...

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  • Friendship

    Do not Challenge me For...
    I will help you cross the ice...
    I will warm you from the cold.
    I will hold you as you cry.
    I will love you until you die.
    I am just a friend.
    When we depart in journey.
    I will hold you deep in thought....
    For it's your eyes that I have caught.
    Do not challenge me for:
    I am just a friend.

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    Hampton commented on Do not Challenge me For...

    12-07-2009

    There appears to be a warning expressed in this poem for some reason that is not disclosed. Maybe a message that says don't expect more from me than just friendship.
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    Hampton

    12/07/2009

    I rated this poem a 10 and it posted an average score of 8.3. Impossible, as i am the only one to rate it thus far.

    blackfootlady

    12/09/2009

    Hampton,Good to see you on this link.Yes I agree there is something wrong with it and it also was totally overlook so I quit writting for 10 months because of it.I was totally discouraged.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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