Death

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    Might not be such a great read. It is an attempt I guess. Please leave a comment if you find I need to improve. Thanks for reading it.

    Death

     

    Slowly it comes cold, icy, dark and dreadful

    Some grieve, some smile, some laugh that it is done

    Yet some loathe

    But when time comes it comes.

     

    All ages, sexes and natural things

    Death does defy all

    The weak, the strong, old and infirm

    The wicked, the gentle

    The rich and the poor

    When it comes - it comes

    Breaking bonds, love, hatred

    Nothing stops, nothing holds

     

    The body cremated or buried merges with the five elements

    Turns to ash, decays and perishes

    Everything is gone with time

    The memories, the presence, the talk

    Some hold dearly

    Some let it fly by and breathe at last – let bygones be gone

    The shared times, secrets, happiness and pain buried and fade

    Nothing gained, nothing lost

    Some in memories kept

    Only pain.

     

    In death, the soul liberates

    Freedom from imprisonment;

    In a body for long

    Freedom from bondage

    Do not grieve - 

    Live not with mortal fear

    Welcome as a long lost friend

    Embrace when it comes

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    RHPeat commented on Death

    02-21-2011

    As every moment should be embraced without fear when it comes. Freedom that bondage is liberating spirit each moment in time and beyond time. Well stated. A poet friend// RH Peat

    shallenemcgrath commented on Death

    02-02-2011

    Shrin, I was just telling my mom to do just this same thing. Her Dad died two weeks ago. I know she was very close to him. It was a sudden thing, but he was very old. I told her that he was probably so glad to get rid of that old body. I am glad that what I know... it is shared by others. Thank you Shrin! Your poetry amazes me.

    Shrin

    02/03/2011

    Shal, I believe your mom does understand. She should be happy for him that he had a full life, enjoyed being with his lovely children and grand children. I am sorry for the loss but such is life.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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