Death Is Not The End

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    Death Is Not The End

    To a Christian,
    Your last breathe on earth,
    Is your first breathe in heaven,
    Death is not the end,
    It is merely a metamorphosis,
    Of this life into the next.

    Like a caterpillar inside
    in a silk spun cocoon,
    We will soon be transformed,
    Death is not the end,
    It is merely the beginning,
    Eternity in paradise awaits us.

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    linlee commented on Death Is Not The End

    07-16-2009

    I believe this, too. At one point in my life I thought I was dying, and I was ready to take a step into a new adventure. As it turned out, I didn't die, obviously, but I realized that i truly did believe in heaven, God, and Christ. Facing possible death is a good way to see how real your beliefs are to you. I liked your comparison of death to a caterpillar coming out of its cocoon. I think, though, that you could have said more about this topic. I feel like there is more to the poem. Just my opinion. I'd like to see it include more. Oh, and I rarely give ratings. It's too much like rating someone's heart and soul.
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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