Dear, stranger

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    Letter to the people

       FOR ALL OF YOU WHO DONT KNOW ME ON THIS LEVEL I WROTE THIS TO MY FATHER A WHILE BACK. IT WAS MENT TO BE A GOODBYE LETTER, BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BE SOMETHING ELSE.SO I HOPE THIS HELPS YOU UNDERSTAND WHERE IVE COME FROM.THERE IS A PART TWO & IT WILL BE POSTED IN A LIL WHILE.& THERE'S ANOTHER FINAL POME THAT I WROTE TO MY FATHER THAT WILL BE POSTED A LILWHILE AFTER PART TWO.SO I HOPE YOU  WILL BE READY! 1 LOVE!P.S. Those of you who asked who Little bit is,that's my baby brother.He's now about 2years old & lives with his foster parents where every they maybe.But know that i will find him & bring him home.

    Dear, stranger

    DADDY?YOU DON'T DESERVE THA NAME. I SEE WHAT MY MOTHER THINKS OF YOU, & AS A MATTER OF FACT I'M STARTING TO FEEL THA SAME.YOUR HURT MY FEELINGS WHITE BOI,YOU'VE TIRN THEM ALL AWAY.YOUR NOT A MAN YOUR JUST A FAKE.YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE COMMING I WAS EVEN WHILLING TO RUN AWAY.TO LET GO OF MY HOPES & MY DREAMS TO BE WITH YOU.SEE I REALLY KNOW YOU NOW.I KNOW THAT YOU NOT WORTHY TO BE CALLED A MAN.DUDE I KNOW THAT WHEN HARD TIMES COME I CAN'T DEPEND ON YOU.OH YEA DAD YOU WANNA KNOW WHAT ELSE I KNOW?I KNOW YOU LOST SOMEONE REAL GOOD & HAD A BABY BY A HOE THAT LEFT YOU ALONE.BUT THAT'S ALRIGHT, WAIT NO IT ISN'T YOU MADE A PROMISE & YOU SAID YOU WOULD KEEP IT,BUT GUESS WHAT PAPI YOU DIDN'T.& I HATE YOU FOR IT!THAT WAS THE ONE PROMISE YOU MADE & DIDN'T KEEP.BUT HEY I CAN'T CHANGE THE PAST. BUT JUST KNOW THIS,LITTLE BIT IS GOING TO BE JUST FINE WITH ME I'M OING TO GIVE HIM THE OVE HE NEEDS & WHEN THE DAY COMES & HE ASKES ME "WHERES DADDY?' I'M GOING TO SAY "HE'S GONE HE'S NO LONGER IN EXSISTANCE."SO DAD YOU THINK YOU KNOW ME NOW?YOU DON'T!YOU'LL NEVA NO THA RAGE I HAVE FOR YOU B-CAU EACH DAY I FIND SOMETHING NEW & I'M GLAD GOD TOOK ME AWAY FROM YOU & I'M GLAD YOU AWAY FROM LITTLE BIT TOO!YOU KNOW WHAT I'M DONE WITH YOU, I'M THREW WITH YOU.BUT THIS WONT BE THE LAST TIME I WRITE TO YOU.SO GET READY FOR PART TWO!

     

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    SEVEN commented on Dear, stranger

    06-22-2009

    Whoa dead beat dads comes in all colors....For a min I thought it was black thang....Well I can't be that stoooopid...I feel ya gurlfriend...Not in the sense of father abandonment but in a sense that I know Alot of single mothers....Well keep on writing and let that "S.O.B" know how u feel, maybe one day he will man up.....I said maybe..

    Ireezy

    09/30/2009

    thnkz for the love

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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