Dad

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    Poem Commentary

    This was inspired when my father was yelling at me and I was staring at our fridge.  I don't like yelling.

    Dad

     All this stuff that I should miss

    I’d rather have in thee abyss.

    There’s nothing here left for me

    I wish they’d just let me be,

    My life has been just thrown away,

    At least that’s what he’d always say.

    There’s no one here to stop my falling

    I can finally hear them calling,

    My life’s gone by so very fast

    I wish I could forget my past.

    Out of all the things I learned

    There was nothing to get what I yearned.

    I’ve always gotten what I don’t need,

    That’s being told, I won’t succeed.

    To remember all the bad

    I just have to think of Dad.

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    Ray37342 commented on Dad

    09-09-2009

    well 1 in line 8 the word here should be hear. This is a sad and hurting, poem, more than that of anger. I could feel your feelings behind this one, I like this poem good choice of words in my opinion.
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