Cynthia-2

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    Cynthia-2

    The day you walk into my life was totally unexpected, how was I supose to know how my heart would be effected, the things you say and do to me are found only in my dreams, but here you are in reality a true and living being, I must confess I prayed for you but douted you exist, then found your kind do walk the earth by evidence of your kiss, Cynthia I tremble when my soul says your everything I need, and my heart proclaims a hunger on you it wants to feed, so please forgive me if I panic in this unfamiliar territory, for the likes of you I"ve never known- Gods special catagory

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    Allie commented on Cynthia-2

    06-05-2009

    I love it....Your heart went it to it I can tell. I wish I could say that about someone one day...Good work.......
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    MOMofTWINS commented on Cynthia-2

    06-05-2009

    Very nice! Intense and serene at the same time. Easy to feel what you are feeling and also easy to relate. Job well done!
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    lovinilife commented on Cynthia-2

    06-05-2009

    I love it, especially the line of "my heart proclaims a hunger on you," very intense and yet I have been there and know what you are saying... very original... would do spell check on final, poem really touched on a personal level
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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