Confused and Upset

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  • Emotional

    Confused and Upset
    Confused and upset
    Are just the beginning
    Of the feelings I have
    That are never ending

    I try and I try
    But it just don't work
    They walk by
    And don't care that I'm hurt

    When they start to listen
    Its already too late
    I slit my wrist
    And thats the end of this

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    pieinfinity commented on Confused and Upset

    12-21-2008

    i feel great rhythm from you to come if i might suggest take the i's out work more on rhyme as you feel check out the feelings 360 degrees do you know what i mean if not write and i will explain better i use to write poems like this when younger
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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