COMMITMENT

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    • CMarsh
    • Feeling much better now that I have found my purpose.

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    What I believe it takes from both partners in a relationship to make it work and last.cc

    COMMITMENT

    In my lifetime I thought I had experienced love;

    I was wrong

    The love I experienced was not true love;

    It was only a mirage, playing with mind, heart and soul;

    I 've traveled many miles searching for love;

     But finding only pain and sorrow

    Now I have found the one person who completes me;

    We have been apart many years;
    Crying many tears,reliving my fears

    We will conquer these fears together;

    Because our love knows no boundaries,

     Together I want to travel a path that neither has taken before;

    To give ones heart to another completely;

    I realize to do so requires great commitment;

    A commitment that I have never experienced;

    I am willing to make this commitment to my true love;

    Will we travel this path together?

    The answer lies within your heart!

     

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    CMarsh’s Poems (19)

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    Crossroads 11
    ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT 33
    Tears of Sorrow 2
    Michael Jackson Tribute 12
    Savage Garden Dedication 13
    First Passionate Kiss 7
    Even though we have never met 6
    FAMILY 6
    LOST LOVE 8
    CHOICES 5
    Hidden Truths 16
    TRUTH 4
    COMMITMENT 3
    Hot Love 2
    HOPE 3
    The Key To My Heart 5
    Unspoken Love 5
    ABSENCE 7