Cold Heart

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    I'm not good in making poems. I made this for our Humanities subject. I don't know if it'll pass. .

    Cold Heart

     

    All I want is to have your dormant heart,

    And heal what thwarts the feeling of loving.

    For you have seized the beauty of man’s art,

    The pleasure of a blissful feeling.

     

    I could not wish, wish of anything else,

    But to unshroud you from solitary.

    You are apt to love, I believe so yes,

    For your eyes’ deep that conceals so many.

     

    You confounds us all, like a sullen tree,

    But like some trees, some birds reside to sing.

    Though vague’s the paint of your physiognomy,

    Deep within me, I am still believing.

     

    Tomorrow you’ll open your heart’s desire,

    And I won’t stop hoping what I’ve aspire.

     

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    iacai commented on Cold Heart

    12-06-2010

    thank you for liking it. =D

    erroneousflint commented on Cold Heart

    09-10-2010

    I believe that one's longing "can" penetrate the most isolated of souls...Many songs have been written about it,,, You delivered me... Thanks...A ten from this guy

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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