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    • poetic22
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    notice the pattern

    in a life perspective think of it as life comin and going and you have to try to live life to the fullest gud times and bad because yu will never know when your time is up

    click click

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    take a pic
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    hear the sounds
    as it goes
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    watch it move
    frame by frame
    in the groove
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    night and day
    watch it past
    in the dark
    cut on the flash
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    no more pics
    that was it
    dead battery
    no more sounds
    as it used to go
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    PRIESTESSMACK commented on click click

    08-25-2009

    YES I UNDERSTAND THE PATTERN OF TRAINING. YOU SEEN ON A GOOD PATH AND YOU ARE STILL YOUNG. YOU HAVE SO MUCH TO EXPERIENCE, PLEASE DON'T TAKE THE PESSIMISTIC VIEW ON LIFE BUT RATHER OPTIMISTIC AND THEN THE UNKNOWN AND THEN YOU CAN COMPARE. THAT'S A START FOR A NEW DIRECTION.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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