can you feel my heart pounding

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    can you feel my heart pounding
    can you feel my heart pounding
    when you lay your hands on my chest
    one day your love will combine with mine
    baby i love to feel you love around me

    so i want to know
    can you feel my heart pounding
    when you lay your hands on my chest
    my love will be your all the time

    we be together forever
    and never be bind
    but once we are married and love today
    we will never be deny

    can you feel my heart pounding through my chest
    when you lay your hans on my chest.

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    christianprep commented on can you feel my heart pounding

    04-25-2011

    I read a few of your poems the gubling was throwing me off.. I don't quite know if it was thought or i did not understand them, but some i kind of did understand.. kind of depressing.. sounds like you got a wonded heart or thats just the kind of poems your into writing... but sad or not Im going to tell you something Important God Is Love.. No matter what he loves you even when you don't know it.. I pray that if its bc of a wonded heart that my words help you.. any ways this poem was nicly writen got a few mistakes.. i kind of like it .. its a happier poem though so i wanted to comment on it... christianprep rate is 8
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on can you feel my heart pounding

    04-01-2009

    Another good one... You need more imagry though..
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