Black Kettle

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    Black Kettle

    Step outside yourself so that you

    Realize how ridiculous you sound

    Gloating while trampling on others dreams

    Spitting out incomprehensible mutterings

    So that you can feel accomplished within.


    Can’t you hear yourself mumbling such asinine crap?

    Unintelligible, ignorant, incessant rambling…wait….

    You’re talking and can’t seem to shut up.

    How about if I assist you…

    Should a gag order be put in place?


    For whatever reason you relish in other’s sorrow

    Supposedly thanking God, it’s not your own.

    Wipe that freakish grin off your face

    Once again you’ve come full circle

    And have allowed your self the honor

    To appear as an insufferable ass.

    Thankfully this time, I shall revel in the glory

    Suffice it to say, I obviously recount the last laugh.

    ©2009.BMSong.

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    dahlusion commented on Black Kettle

    04-06-2010

    "For whatever reason you relish in other’s sorrow Supposedly thanking God, it’s not your own Wipe that freakish grin off your face" — nothing like both barrels form the hip tell-it-like-it-is with a lyrical ceaselessness that hungers for readers. Not one word is misplaced, nor can you refuse the sentences they form. Bravo!!
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    BrielleC

    04/07/2010

    Thank you!!!So glad it is appreciated!!

    redbloodink commented on Black Kettle

    01-31-2010

    I can say... to laugh at others time of misery can become your own... I laugh at no-one... just at the things that happen to me... a laugh at my sarrow and pain.... I have victory in Christ....... red
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    BrielleC

    01/31/2010

    Awesome comment! While I cant relate to you in that way, I can understand.

    MalikPeterson commented on Black Kettle

    11-12-2009

    SHOTS FIRED!!!! lol. This is a good angry piece right here. Your annoyance is so prevalent and it lends such flavor and passion to this one. I can just see you laying the verbal wood to whoever this person is and can picture their downfall and humiliation.I am sure you deserve the last laugh. May the kudos be with you(that is my trademarked saying...you can use it if you like...just give me my credit lol) Cheers!!!
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    BrielleC

    11/12/2009

    LOL thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed this piece as it is def about someone that has pretended to be a friend but not really

    BadBadBear commented on Black Kettle

    10-29-2009

    Your fine writing is so there .. in your face towards this person that could have easily caused hate. Familiar with your work, i've to say there's not a hateful bone in your body. You've overcome even before your last laugh. Great write!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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