Betrayed

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    Betrayed

     BETRAYED

    You betrayed me,
    I couldn't see.
    I trusted you,
    and what did you do?

    To me you had lied,
    I Believed YOU when you cried.
    I was betrayed,
    Yet still I stayed.

    I was believing,
    Through all of your decieving.
    For you the rules I would bend,
    Because I was your friend. 

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    rossmangeles commented on Betrayed

    06-30-2009

    Through thick and thin, though right or wrong, I will always be your friend. Betrayal puts crack on the glass. I commend you for being a loyal friend. I enjoy the poem and the message.
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    TiannaMarie

    08/11/2009

    Thank you. This is one that I wrote in 9th grade. Little did I know at the time-- this is one that continues throughout our lives. We try to trust that everyone has good intentions, but all too often find that the werent so good.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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