Betrayed Friendship

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Betrayed Friendship

It was a very sunny day

When Ode met you with a smile

Reaching forth for a friendship

That seemed would last a lifetime

 

It was a very cold day

When Ode handed you his only coat

Reaching forth for a sacrifice

That seemed worth offering

 

It was a very calm day

When Ode knelt beside your sick bed

Reaching forth for a love

That seemed could bind forever

 

It was a very sunny day

When you framed Ode in a crime scene

Reaching forth for a betrayal

That could leave a lasting pain

 

      Oh! What have you made out of true friendship?

     Why have you turned sweet sour?

     And taken the nectar out of the flower?

     You have altered the beautiful design of God

      Just like the people betrayed the love of our Lord

 

 

Copyright © Christopher Awortwe

 

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courage commented on Betrayed Friendship

07-03-2009

Very well writen. I can feel your pain. Well worded. I enjoyed, but felt sad too.

cawortwe

07/05/2009

Thanks

Crush commented on Betrayed Friendship

06-30-2009

i like this poem in it's insight and sadness and I feel I feel like II should say, I am sorry.

cawortwe

06/30/2009

thanks for your comment.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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