Because of You

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    My very first poem. Hope you like it:)

    Because of You

     Because of you i'm nothing but a shell
    You left me hollow and broken.
    Because of you, i'm going to burn in hell
    Because of you i cried for days
    Because of you i moved away
    Because of you, for me, there is no tomorrow
    Because of you, I shot myself
    and now you're drowning in sorrow
    Because of you, i'm dead,
    Today i wouldn't be,
    If u hadn't said goodbye
    To me

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    Ninjaboy commented on Because of You

    02-18-2011

    no words can define this one, atleast none i can think of................................10 here
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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