Beautiful from the start

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    Beautiful from the start
    We started off as friend
    On a journey to happiness
    Good conversations on sunny days
    Over glasses of Merlot half full
    Optimistic about our destination
    Temperatures rising
    It’s still cool for you to do you
    But now we focus on us
    What started off as a crush
    Turned into more
    MI AMOUR
    Now we sore pass the stars
    Connecting on a whole other level
    In synch by the rhythms of our hearts
    We were friends before we were lovers
    Beautiful from the start

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    patty24 commented on Beautiful from the start

    11-23-2009

    I love this poem, so romantic and so sweet! It makes me dream of an special someone...
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    SweetSatin commented on Beautiful from the start

    10-25-2009

    Refreshing. Sounds like real love are you guys still together? Or atleast friends?
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    MB commented on Beautiful from the start

    09-07-2009

    This is another one that I like bra. I gotta tell you, you get it in
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    1990lh commented on Beautiful from the start

    07-18-2009

    beautiful poem from a beautiful soul ove it great write
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    EbonyQueen48 commented on Beautiful from the start

    06-09-2009

    Absolutely refreshing, this captures your imagination and it flows so freely, it lights fires to the readers heart. you are awesome and a wonderful writer, continue to dazzle the world with your Gift!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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