Bad habits take decade off life

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    Bad habits take decade off life

    After a hearty  8 minute  breakfast
    5 seconds lay strewn in the corner.
    'oh shit!!!'(0.3 secs)

    'Another 15 seconds there',
    he mused , 
    as  the elevator doors slid to a close


    last week 
    if he had cared(1.5 secs)
    he could have saved 3 hours!!!!
    (the other 35 minutes were inevitable)

    deep 3.5 second  drag- must give up, 
    last week he drank 2 days!!!!

    Time flies when you are enjoying yourself,
    draws itself in,
    wraps round itself.

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    davidcircle’s Poems (18)

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