BABY YOU

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    BABY YOU
    BABY YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME, I WOULD DIE FOR YOU TONIGHT IF I HAD TOO. BABY YOU CAME INTO MY LIFE LIKE A SHOTING STAR, YOU FLEW SO FAST PAST MY HEART, MY HEART OPEN UP AND COUGHT YOU. YOU MEAN SO MUCH TO ME, BABY YOU ARE THE REASON I'M ALIVE.

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    Nigel commented on BABY YOU

    11-13-2008

    Good start! Re-look your work and U will see there is more to what is written - open your heart and let what U feel be revealed.
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    Nigel commented on BABY YOU

    11-13-2008

    Good start! Re-look your work and U will see there is more to what is written - open your heart and let what U feel be revealed.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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