At That Moment

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  • Lost Love

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    I was 16 when i wrote this on 11-1-94 when i broke up with someone i cared for very much

    At That Moment

    At that moment her heart and thoughts changed
    and at that moment her feelings were rearranged
    she thought her feelings wouldn't last
    and somehow it would all be in the past
    but something went wrong
    and in her head played a verse of a love song.

    She thinks of the one she left behind
    and she felt so bad
    it made her sad.
    When they touched
    they felt so much
    she realized she did care
    and that her feelings were hard to bare.

    The moonlight left a glare in the sky
    and she knew soon he'd say goodbye
    he didn't want to go
    and that she did know
    but time cant stay still
    even though her heart was filled
    the dream itself had been killed.

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