Are You Trying To Make Me Stop Loving You?

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  • Lost Love

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    The confussion of do you love me or do you not? Are all the times you told me so, long lost in all the fame, giving to them or her or him one or the other has come to take, from me my life, my love my entire world, the you who once told me I love you for ever more, but now I only find you've closed the door. Where are you? I only want to love you!

    Are You Trying To Make Me Stop Loving You?

     I say call me one day only to find no one on the line
    An email was sent only to get no answer at all
    Are you trying to make me stop loving you

    The last time I called and talked to you your voice was crude
    Of pain or hurt which one could it be that makes me think
    Are you trying to make me stop loving you

    I try and try to share my love only to find you close me off
    After a storm of rian my heart it turns to insaine pain
    Are you trying to make me stop loving you

    I look each day for a call from you a note or card you want to share
    Only I end up alone wishing to know if you want me or not or
    Are you trying to make me stop loving you

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    zaphnathpaaneah commented on Are You Trying To Make Me Stop Loving You?

    09-30-2009

    We cannot stop loving if we really love, for if we do, that’s the time we lose the one we love. Yes, leave the pain behind and hold on! Be happy knowing that the one we love is happy. Only then can we prove we have truly loved. zaph
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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