An Explanation for a Pain Like This

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    An Explanation for a Pain Like This

    It shakes,
    It quivers,
    It shivers all over.
    You cannot see it,
    But I,
    I can only feel it.
    My heart trembles,
    And aches,
    My love for you
    Is so strong,
    It hurts to say goodbye,
    I cannot hide this feeling,
    Not for very long,
    You make me feel so safe and secure,
    Like nothing can brake us apart.
    But I have dropped,
    Miles and miles
    Away from you,
    Into a dark,
    Cold,
    Empty place.
    Without you,
    I am nothing.
    My heart shakes,
    Because I no longer have the confidence
    That you gave me,
    My heart quivers,
    Because I no longer have the stability
    To stand strong,
    My heart shivers all over,
    Because I no longer have your arms
    To comfort me,
    You cannot see it,
    I can only feel it.

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    dannyrobertm commented on An Explanation for a Pain Like This

    02-19-2009

    not bad kiddo. only 15, huh? my daughter writes some poetry almost as good, and she's only 13. kept the theme alive throughout, and you've got a very personable POV.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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