All Eternity

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    All Eternity

     My days are full of thoughts of you
    My nights are just as well
    The love i feel is oh so strong
    I'm underneath your spell.
    We share a special tenderness
    And that i don't compare
    I know deep down inside my heart
    You really,really care.
    I thank god that i met you
    You're the perfect one for me
    I love you more than ever
    And for all eternity.

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    HarverTomsson commented on All Eternity

    06-09-2009

    You write with a hint of low self esteem. You use lower case I when refering to self unless at the beginning of a line, and then you drop the bomb, "that i don't compare." To what or whom? this cannot be good. If you want this man, get some gumption (see"The Holiday" movie for more). Wishing you success.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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