A true friend

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    this is for all my friends but ry the most.

    A true friend

     A true friend is there
    A true friend all ways knows when something is wrong,
    A true friend keeps you from feeling blue
    A true friend will tell the truth
    A true friend will put a smile on your face
    A true friend is how i explain you
    A true friend is you
    A true friend can keep you safe.
    i say this because of a true friend
    who is you

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    MariahRittel commented on A true friend

    10-03-2009

    Awesome poem & it is so true. I just think maybe you could take out the 7th line because you say that in the last line & it doesn't flow right.
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    uriah007 commented on A true friend

    10-01-2009

    That's very sweet Raven. It's so touching. Rygar you should feel priviliged and proud. Raven thanks for sharing...
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    Rygar commented on A true friend

    10-01-2009

    thats whats up!!! how can i not score this a 10! :P
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