a message to all fathers

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    • phantom
    • LOVE HAS NO FACE, NO COLOR, AND NO SHAPE. LOVE IS WHEN TWO PEOPLES HEART COME TOGETHER AND BECOME ONE.

    a message to all fathers
    time is death, time is life
    so spend your time with your sons and wife
    do not let your sons live a life of trife
    dis to all fathers is my only advice
    my dad was there but not as much as i wanted him to
    let your son say that his inspiration is you
    show him the road to success
    pick his spirit up when he stressed
    show him what a condom is for when he is having sex
    let your name beat when his heart beats through his chest
    last time i saw my dad it was 4 years ago
    a gangster jaja yet to this subject tears i show
    tell him that in the streets death is the only way to go
    take this advice and let him know
    now when my first child is born
    i will be there and that i sworn
    when he takes his first steps and his skin gets torn
    i will be there, even if it means i have to tear the devils horns
    every now and then buy him a toy
    show him that hes your favorite boy
    show him that hes your creation and hes your pride and joy

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    labitch commented on a message to all fathers

    09-21-2010

    I truly liked this, phantom! deep i'm going to read ur other father poem now to see if the two relate Great job!!
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    brokenhearted11 commented on a message to all fathers

    07-07-2010

    love it! a really powerful message, portrayed in the purest of forms . good job , keep writing :)
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    KING commented on a message to all fathers

    05-27-2010

    I like this man. It reminds me of the father I never had. I shook him to the left because in those days he was a bad man. Keep your writing up man. :)
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    eddie14 commented on a message to all fathers

    05-04-2010

    i realy like reading you work it hit me deep down inside cause my dad was just a dad he was not my father he never did nothen with me except wipe my ass. he was married to the alcohol till he dieing day now hes worm food no grass grows were his barried just weeds
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    kpeery09 commented on a message to all fathers

    04-27-2010

    This is a good way to give a message man, good job, its truly something that every man who becomes a father should do, but dont over do it. Because if you over do it with rewards they will start doing bad things and think they will get a reward. But still this was an excellent write and I give you 10
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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