A little weed

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A little weed

Weed, Weed, Weed, refusing to die.

Creeping through the crack,

You may kill me now, but I will be back.

This is my eternal promise.

 

My immortal hand holds the fire,

Pointing the way to what I aspire.

I will be strong.

My future will be bright, one day.

 

You cannot kill my ambition.

My desire will not die.

I may hurt, I may cry,

I will continue.

 

Weed, Weed, Weed, refusing to die.

Creeping through the crack,

You may kill me now, but i will be back.

This is my eternal promise.

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Derico commented on A little weed

09-14-2009

A comedic stance from a weed. Great creativity, but portrays the character of determination, great stuff!

SmileyAngel138 commented on A little weed

08-03-2009

i like how u used a little weed represent obstacles in our lives, at the end of the day u will triumph...another great job :-)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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