A finished poem

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    A finished poem


    White blank sheet staring
    Angry bees, whirling, thoughts dart
    Release is so good.

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    Tortuga commented on A finished poem

    06-30-2009

    Pretty good. May I refer you to one of mine titled Veritas
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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