A Final Choice

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    A Final Choice
    You need to make a final choice.
    We may not have known it from the start,
    But now we found each other's hearts.
    I cannot wait forever,
    I will have to move on.
    You're my shining star,
    Your eyes shine in the light and dark,
    You’re truly an amazing person,
    You just need to look deep within,
    I see who you are inside,
    And I don’t care that you are short,
    Cause everything about you is perfect,
    All you have to do,
    Is make a final choice…

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    chadallac74 commented on A Final Choice

    02-28-2009

    Well written. I was surprised at the line, ".......you're short." I laughed a little... did I say little, I laughed!!!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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