A Dark Affirmation

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    A Dark Affirmation

    From across the street,

    The false owl stares at me…

    And I am drawn to the dissolution in His eyes.

    …Held rapt, I look on in a mixture of terror and fascination…

    AND I SEE:

    -Pupils dilated with death-
    -Corneas punctuated by the prophecy of a bleak future-
    -Irises blackened by the hellfire of foretold damnation-

    And the mutual foresights that this inhuman prophet and I share portend a future world progressing only in its deterioration;

    A dank world of fungus and misery lessened only by eternal sleep.

    AND I WONDER:

    Has humanity truly baited its own hook?
    Has civilization grown so large that it distorts the seams of tranquility?
    Is our once-humble world really being led to the perdition depicted by my vision?


    The owl nods.

    …YES…




    -Jordan S. Daniels

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    ansari commented on A Dark Affirmation

    06-21-2010

    a poem depicting sadness with lot of imagery. only I hope we are not heading towards gloom. a 10 from me.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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