A Childs Wish (rev.)

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    It's time to stop the suffering. We can make a difference , you just have to want it bad enough !!

    A Childs Wish (rev.)

    A tear fell

    Upon my cheek

    As I tried

    To fall asleep

    I think of the children

    Who have no bed

    Or a place to rest

    Their little heads

    Then I think

    Did I do

    Everything I could’ve

    Or wanted to

    At this special

    Time of year

    Do all you can

    To ease their fears

    So before you go to bed

    Just ask yourself this

    Is there a way for me

    To grant a child’s wish

    Copyright 2009 ©William J. Fleitz

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    Rhymer commented on A Childs Wish (rev.)

    12-24-2009

    A sad but excellent write. Sometimes to grant a childs wish is only a matter of being there. A wonderful reminder to all of us that we can do more and not only during the christmas season. 10 from me.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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