留学辅导需要注意的论文常见问题
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留学辅导需要注意的论文常见问题
很多同学留学辅导后会觉得自己通过了雅思托福,面对国外论文写作就没有问题了。其实不然,我们很多中国留学生面对国外论文的时候,会经常犯一些常见的错误。
很多同学不是很在意一些常见的错误,但是往往就是这些问题决定了你的论文的质量以及分数的高低。今天我们就来简单说一下中国留学生论文辅导的问题。
(一) 时态语态
动词的时态语态变化是英语中重要的一种形式变化,其中时态是指动作发生的时间(时)和动作进行的状态(态),语态是指句子的主语和谓语动词之间是何种关系。
写作中要根据表达的目的和需求,选择合适的时态语态变化。如:
Some people welcomed (正确应为:welcome,保持与后面 look 一致)the progress and look forward to in a variety of fields for the benefit of mankind.
The news has been sparked (应去掉 been,用主动语态)a heated debate and spread throughout the world quickly.
(二)句子成分
句子成分的错误主要集中在成分缺失、成分冗余以及其他不规范的用法等问题上。如:
成分缺失 As with every newly-emerging thing, there are optimistic and pessimistic (缺少主语,可补充 sentiments) towards it.
成分冗余 I am stunned to learn that it is(谓语重复,可去掉 is)serves as a sharp double-edged sword towards us human.
(三)不一致 Disagreements
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了单复数的不一致,时态不一致和代词不一致等。
下面我们来看几个例子。
主谓不一致:
When one have money, he can do what he want to .
one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has; 同理,want应改为wants。
本句是典型的主谓不一致。
应该改为:Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).
单复数不一致:
Different groups hold different view(正确应为 views).
时态不一致:
Water will boil at 100.
表示客观真理的句子,其谓语动词应用一般现在时。
正确应该改为:Water boils at 100.
代词不一致:
Each cigarette a person smokes does some harm, and eventually, they may get a series of diseases.
这里的they指代的是前面的a person,所以需要改成单数形式的he。
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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA