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Honest Critique of my writing, Please.

12-24-2010 at 11:40:10 PM

Honest Critique of my writing, Please.

I'm looking for an honest Critiques of my writing . I would like honest evaluations of non-bias individuals to help me out.



Just have a quick browse through a few of my poems, I don't really have a set one that I want evaluated just an overall impression, although if you want to single one out and offer suggestions I'm fine with that too.



Thanks

02-24-2011 at 11:19:09 PM

RE: Honest Critique of my writing, Please.

Hey. ill check out your stuff if you dont mind checking out "The Apple of My E.Y.E.". I just got started on the post today since its a challenge story. And the word limit is 650 words max. Its supposed to have 6 elements:
1. Thing: Apple
2. Place: Train Station
3. When: Utopian/Dystopian Time
4. Color: Violet
5. Random Word: Effigy
6.Overall Word: Tense

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