Snakes Passing Out Apples (new poem)

come and have a bite.

peace and light, dah

RE: Snakes Passing Out Apples (new poem)

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Originally Posted by dahlusion

come and have a bite.

peace and light, dah

RE: Snakes Passing Out Apples (new poem)

Quote:

Originally Posted by dahlusion

come and have a bite.

peace and light, dah

RE: Snakes Passing Out Apples (new poem)

Last edited by cousinsoren 09-22-2010 at 06:24:04 PM

RE: Snakes Passing Out Apples (new poem)

Have visited the snake-pit! Most startling and striking! I did didn't wait long enough to get one o'dem darK-looking apples, Too many people were there waiting to get their's I just stop long enough to read and write down mi name...............LOL

I think, folks, you should go see for yourself.

You may even get lucky. In any case, the reading is curious and enjoyable. It is so enjoyable, that I don't mind that I didn;'t get an apple. May be it ain't too good to get one o'dem apples from a snake, after-all. Could be danjarass! Next time! .............LOL[
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Tremendous symbolism ,here, My Friend, bordering on surrealism, Dah, I have got to read some more of your poems to assure myself that I am right in my thinking and estimation of this mind-boggling, brain-buster of a poem. The clarity is there for all who may read, It's like looking through the opposite end of a telescope to see a vortex or swirling smoke in the wind. . But to explore its under-currents one needs diving gear......a submarine probably......LOL . My rating for all- round literary dexterity and perfection ,and serpentine puzzlement is 10+ "From the other side, at the end of a final exhale, sinister angels and doomed spheres and daylight that’s never born."..................................................... OMG! Was Dah having a metaphysical nightmare of the mystery of death?? ?????".Now I can hear the other side and feel the cold dawns freeze-over a few at a time." I think we need Wordslinger's "key of thw city" to wade through the maze and corridors of this poem, without getting lost on the way................LOL.
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Last edited by cousinsoren 09-22-2010 at 06:32:58 PM

RE: Snakes Passing Out Apples (new poem)

thank you, kind sir