WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRY
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WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRY
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RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYWhatever works for Wordslinger, whatever inspires him...we all have our different modes and methods of inspiration, and if the subject of time is Wordslinger's saving grace, then so be it... |
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RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYWe old guys can take issue . Cousin and I are just a little jealous because he has a little more of it than us I guess. Last edited by NevillePark 03-24-2010 at 11:20:15 PM |
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RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote: Originally Posted by NevillePark We old guys can take issue . Cousin and I are just a little jealous because he has a little more of it than us I guess. Damn right, Neville! . But you and I ( and guys like us) got a headstart. He can't catch up with us....... 
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RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote: Originally Posted by uspslady Whatever works for Wordslinger, whatever inspires him...we all have our different modes and methods of inspiration, and if the subject of time is Wordslinger's saving grace, then so be it... Hi, Upslady, Did I thank you for your sweet and generous support? If I haven't done so yet, never mind Don't haul me over the coals. I can't overlook you,as I have a check list, but it is a very long list. Yeah, I agree 100% with what you say here. However, we ought to look over one another's shoulder to peek at and to analyse what each of us is doing, especially when some of us are naturally gifted and can do no wrong. I call it prying and su-su-in', interfering or fassin' into and exposing or talkin' people's business . ........................LOL 
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Originally Posted by cousinsoren LOOK OUT for Cousinsoren's discourse on WordSlinger's preoccupation with the passing of time, in his poetry, to be posted soon, |
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RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote:
Originally Posted by Bettysrainbow48 Originally Posted by cousinsoren [/quote I feel that any work done by Cousinsoren is very professionaly done . People enjoy his poetry . The subjects he writes about bring an interest to his readers. WordSlinger is considered a very exscellant writer as well. I am looking forward to reading their work soon .Like a cadilac in poetry they amoung many others are top of the line. LOOK OUT for Cousinsoren's discourse on WordSlinger's preoccupation with the passing of time, in his poetry, to be posted soon,   |
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RE: RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote:
Originally Posted by Bettysrainbow48 Originally Posted by Bettysrainbow48 Originally Posted by cousinsoren [/quote I feel that any work done by Cousinsoren is very professionaly done . People enjoy his poetry . The subjects he writes about bring an interest to his readers. WordSlinger is considered a very exscellant writer as well. I am looking forward to reading their work soon .Like a cadilac in poetry they amoung many others are top of the line. LOOK OUT for Cousinsoren's discourse on WordSlinger's preoccupation with the passing of time, in his poetry, to be posted soon, [/quote]Like a cadillac, eh, Betty? ..................LOL I feel humble in front of such regal compliments. THANKS. WordSlinger is an unparallelled domain to himself. There are some other very brilliant poets on OP. Some know that they are brilliantly gifted. Some others have not yet discovered that they are brilliant.................. Last edited by cousinsoren 03-25-2010 at 07:53:59 PM |
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POETRY CLASS ON HISTORYWe are snow, unless those choose to be a snow flake, I am part of the snow, so |
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RE: POETRY CLASS ON HISTORYQuote: Originally Posted by WordSlinger We are snow, unless those choose to be a snow flake, I am part of the snow, so let's get back to reading, writing, commenting, and critique Oren start a History Poetry Class, on the fundamentals of traveling back to an era, and capturing the life, PLEASE thank you WS TELL DEM, MISSA WORDSLINGER. TELL DEM,SAH! Let us all thaw out (Spring is here again) and get aboard the HISTORY SHIP. This ship is unique. It sails backwards into the oceans and seas of past time. There is a berth and a bunk for all hands. COME ABOARD, Marsink, JadeMelissa and Brett. . Is there a Captain Blood? ........... 
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RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYI am not in league of knowledge of history Last edited by Marsink 04-03-2010 at 07:03:19 PM |
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RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote: Originally Posted by Marsink I am not in league of knowledge of history nor have I imbibed in the inspiring intoxicant Of the mariner's sought treasure. But in a dream of layered and luscious detail I envisioned the heavens to open, alive And pour forth upon the oceans Receptive of the chain reaction by Their combined beautious And bold rendezvous: An atmospheric flowering plume From elemental peers exhumed Explosive, wonderous, amber veins Upon, within the Mariner's plains Blackness torn by shrouds incision Pains by birthing clouds collision Transparent wakes seiged by hues In iridescent waves infused I will sail as a hand on the History Ship, Blown by the winds of Providence Captain Oren, guide us fair and well ******************************************************************************************* Marsink, I simply adore this magniificent, poetic acme of yours. Even if you tried very hard to be imperfect, you cannot succeed. .........  Recheck, however, for correrction the folllowing" wonderous seiged indescent (re indescent, do you mean "indecent or "iridescent" Naw! Correct the last line , I am the cooK:.......lol Neville Parks is the captain. Kabbalistic seems to be the quartermaster or firstmate. Wordslinger seems to be the helmsman..... He will steer us in and out of unknown seas.............lol No woman has joined the crew, up to now, but one....... Cool runnin's, friend.. Last edited by cousinsoren 03-27-2010 at 10:16:51 AM |
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RE: RE: RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote:
Originally Posted by cousinsoren Originally Posted by Bettysrainbow48 Originally Posted by Bettysrainbow48 Originally Posted by cousinsoren [/quote I feel that any work done by Cousinsoren is very professionaly done . People enjoy his poetry . The subjects he writes about bring an interest to his readers. WordSlinger is considered a very exscellant writer as well. I am looking forward to reading their work soon .Like a cadilac in poetry they amoung many others are top of the line. LOOK OUT for Cousinsoren's discourse on WordSlinger's preoccupation with the passing of time, in his poetry, to be posted soon, [/quote]To all my poet friends: Now I did say amoung many others and yes I read enough of all of your work to know. Woman join in here now.They have a lot of inpressive work too.Go ladies!! Go gentlemen!! Caddy's were pink too. I can think of many others that are good too but this is about him now. Gogant and you. Like a cadillac, eh, Betty? ..................LOL I feel humble in front of such regal compliments. THANKS. WordSlinger is an unparallelled domain to himself. There are some other very brilliant poets on OP. Some know that they are brilliantly gifted. Some others have not yet discovered that they are brilliant.................. |
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RE: RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote: Originally Posted by cousinsoren Originally Posted by NevillePark We old guys can take issue . Cousin and I are just a little jealous because he has a little more of it than us I guess. Damn right, Neville! . But you and I ( and guys like us) got a headstart. He can't catch up with us....... Stand Tall you are all good poets nothing to be jealous about at all. I'm learning a lot from all of you.I am proud of all of my poet friends.Your talent is out standing. 
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RE: POETRY CLASS ON HISTORYQuote: Wordslinger no doubt about it you are top of the line too. A very good poet. Thank you for being there for all of us too.Originally Posted by WordSlinger We are snow, unless those choose to be a snow flake, I am part of the snow, so let's get back to reading, writing, commenting, and critique Oren start a History Poetry Class, on the fundamentals of traveling back to an era, and capturing the life, PLEASE thank you WS
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RE: RE: RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYQuote: Originally Posted by cousinsoren Originally Posted by Marsink I am not in league of knowledge of history nor have I imbibed in the inspiring intoxicant Of the mariner's sought treasure. But in a dream of layered and luscious detail I envisioned the heavens to open, alive And pour forth upon the oceans Receptive of the chain reaction by Their combined beautious And bold rendezvous: An atmospheric flowering plume From elemental peers exhumed Explosive, wonderous, amber veins Upon, within the Mariner's plains Blackness torn by shrouds incision Pains by birthing clouds collision Transparent wakes seiged by hues In iridescent waves infused I will sail as a hand on the History Ship, Blown by the winds of Providence Captain Oren, guide us fair and well ******************************************************************************************* Marsink, I simply adore this magniificent, poetic acme of yours. Even if you tried very hard to be imperfect, you cannot succeed. ......... Recheck, however, for correrction the folllowing" wonderous seiged indescent (re indescent, do you mean "indecent or "iridescent" Naw! Correct the last line , I am the cooK:.......lol Neville Parks is the captain. Kabbalistic seems to be the quartermaster or firstmate. Wordslinger seems to be the helmsman..... He will steer us in and out of unknown seas.............lol No woman has joined the crew, up to now, but one....... Cool runnin's, friend.. Come on ladies join in. Move over gentlemen,  we are woman!! LOL Make room for us on the bench. We want to be heard too!! Thank you.
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RE: WORDSLINGER"S PREOCCUPATION WITH TIME IN HIS POETRYTime and history. Hey - what would we do without them anyway? |
In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.
Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.