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Gimme a Poem

11-07-2009 at 09:03:09 PM

Gimme a Poem

I have recently done the unthinkable and cut off a good portion of my hair.
It was really long, about hip length.
And now it's about shoulder length.
I haven't done anything but trim my hair since I was 10.
And now I miss it.
So, just because I feel silly and sentimental...
Anyone have a poem about hair?
downer

Last edited by KtIrish 11-07-2009 at 09:11:36 PM

11-07-2009 at 09:15:22 PM

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George Carlin has a great hair poem

11-07-2009 at 10:16:57 PM

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Just being curious said the cat...Do you have red hair, Caity ?

surprised

11-07-2009 at 11:36:21 PM

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George Carlin is hilarious! So sad he died...
And no Gogant, I have rather plain medium brown hair.
And on a side note, curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back.

Last edited by KtIrish 11-08-2009 at 12:07:19 AM

11-08-2009 at 12:20:01 AM

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No time for tears, dear child............ You must now look in the mirror with no more fearer.
And see as the days draw nearer, your destiny clearer. Your resolve, the stronger
as days grow longer, your hair will indeed be the glory of a song, girl. wink cool smile
Marck

11-08-2009 at 12:24:37 AM

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I thought all Irish girls had red hair and freckles...do you at least have freckles ? Did you read my poem, A Dublin Cairn ?

George Carlin 1st, then Rodney Dangerfield. LOL

And as the Rolling stones, and the cat said, "I can't get no, satisfaction..." Hey...nothing personal, caity... grin

red face.....................................................gogant

11-08-2009 at 04:12:09 AM

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I mention how I should cut my hair in a poem. Does that count?

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http://www.originalpoetry.com/are-we-a-lot

11-08-2009 at 12:12:58 PM

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My family is irish in ancestry. But I do have freckles...
And I read Dublin Cairn.
Rodney is hilarious too.
And I don't like the Rolling Stones...Mick Jagger freaks me out...
Thanks Marck.

11-08-2009 at 12:57:41 PM

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KtIrish

Caity's Hair

a fine brown shade
some gone .. some left
fret not .. it'll grow back if you choose

don't give it to fishermen
they'll create fishing baits
taking many salmon
leaving bears less to eat
i'm only pleading a bear's case

surround it with love beads
snug the ends .. add a clip
hang it on your stereo
play some cool hippie vibes
turn a black light on
Caity's hair

BadBadBear

cool smirk

Last edited by BadBadBear 11-08-2009 at 03:36:23 PM

11-08-2009 at 02:23:44 PM

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Lmao, thanks Bear!

11-08-2009 at 02:50:12 PM

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Laughing when i wrote it! Hope you enjoyed it Caity!

11-08-2009 at 08:02:41 PM

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Finally, Caity, I can ask someone who is intelligent enough to answer a simple question. What does lmao means ?

Another thing, Caity, why don't you add a photo of you on your home page ? That makes three times that I have asked that. You can always tell me to mind my own business at any time.
zipper

That's right...you did read that poem...red face

And, bear, that was a terrible poem about hair. I wish you would write a poem about my flowing locks too...and don't laugh. tongue rolleye

11-08-2009 at 08:16:16 PM

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I appreciate Caity's appreciation
Was inspired in part,
from fashion sense declaration
By clipping the locks
of her life's culmination
Hence this is written of
All across the nation rolleyes LOL cool smile

11-08-2009 at 08:56:41 PM

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gogant, you really have been on the ranch too long. I believe we're about to turn this band
of La. ladies loose to come to your town. They're still talking about tar and feathering you.

Glad you enjoyed the poem but it's not for you. Can't accept your offer, i only write for females. Keep searching, i'm sure there's a male somewhere on the site that will write for you. Good luck with that! *LOL* btw, i believe lmao means ( lame men are obnoxious ) but i'm not sure. *LOL*
cool smirk

11-08-2009 at 09:16:24 PM

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Okay, Bear...at least you didn't say something bad about my dog. The line in your poem to Caity...

don't give it to fishermen
they'll create fishing baits grrr

What on earth do you people in the Virgin Islands do...hang around the local barber shop for awhile, and then go fishing ? shut eye

The ladies say I am pretty...pretty ugly, that is.......................................g


11-08-2009 at 11:11:30 PM

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Gogant you know it's just a bit of light hearted joking. Glad you have a dog though.
You like those two lines, thanks. Now you know i can't tell what we do over here on the island or we'll be overrun by transients.

BadBadBear
cool smirk

11-08-2009 at 11:26:59 PM

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Oh, my goodness, I leave this thread for a day and y'all are acting like children, do I have to seperate you two?
Just kidding.
Ok, Lmao, means 'laugh my ass off'
And I'd rather not have my hair made into fishing bait...
I really like that one Marsink!
And as to the picture...I might.
I'm still thinking about it. I rather like being a mystery.

11-08-2009 at 11:51:45 PM

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Bear and I, and Mr. Ink do a lot of joking around, so you won't have to separate us, Caity. You might want to think about seeing if you can get Bear released from those bamboo cages on the Islands of Virgins, though. tongue rolleye

And I'm glad you didn't care much for Bears poem about your hair...sick

You can enjoy some sweet poetry by reading my latest poem, Girl on a Swing..........just thought I would get that plug in here.


grin......................g

11-09-2009 at 12:05:36 AM

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Caity, that was simply shameless to be left with self-promotion (but it far exceeds self-loathing)I gather you could be a real swinger. Anywhy's you're not gonna find me promoting my latest work entitled Beckoning One... what is it with you folk? LOL shock

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11-09-2009 at 12:24:54 AM

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You get better with age, Mr. Ink. That was a good one...your latest poem, that is.
OP said I was too ugly, so they took my picture off...............well, I guess I'll have to put my beefcake shot back up.

cheese

11-09-2009 at 02:04:39 AM

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I think you may not be ugly, but more of a 'mysterion dude'. I don't believe anybody knows what you look like now. If you're a classic relic, then stick with the classics. and thanks for the reply; (I thought that Caity would be the one to pick up on my subtlety) shock

11-09-2009 at 09:27:10 AM

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Very subtle indeeed.
I'll take a look at y'alls poems as soon as I can.
That reminds me, Ive been meaning to ask, gogant it seems as if your picutre, age, and location changes all the time.
Whats up with that?

11-12-2009 at 12:36:18 AM

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I guess I can't make up my mind. I am a male, though. Just ask me anything...and I will answer truthfully...he said uncertainly, and with no visible signs of deceit.


smile
wink
tongue wink

11-13-2009 at 09:12:31 AM

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So, ask me no questions and I'll tell you no lies?

11-13-2009 at 09:43:06 PM

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Quote:
Originally Posted by KtIrish

So, ask me no questions and I'll tell you no lies?



I can not tell a lie,
my hands sweating
thinking what to do.
If e'er I was to tell a lie,
I wouldn't tell it to you.

confused

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.