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Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

10-17-2009 at 05:12:07 PM

Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

I'm still begging for comments on my poems, Losing Faith, She Cries No More, and My Little One..............I gotta win the poem of the week, or my wife will leave me..............gogant

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10-17-2009 at 07:49:27 PM

Re: Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

This sounds serious! As a marriage counselor *joking* i must say i'll steal the time and stroll over to comment on these three. You seem to be a fair sort of fellow so three are expected in return. ( Your choice per which three ) Now the signs read: "do not feed the bears" and no signs exist stating "do not beg the bears". Bears do read though it's not a well known fact. You must be going for your 2nd weekly win since it seems as if you should already have one. Take this pic of your wife down! *excuse my bad humor*

BadBadBear cool smirk

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10-17-2009 at 10:43:52 PM

Re: Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

You're a breezy kind of guy, and witty too. Not yet am I the king of OP, I've been trying though.

Take this pic of your wife down! You'll have to tell me what you mean with this line...

Well I'm off to visit the den of the bear...I hope you're hibernating. Thanks for the comments on my poems, bad, bad. badder, bear.

LOL

10-17-2009 at 11:22:37 PM

Re: Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

I do move quite often. You may as well be king, your great writing becomes you.

The pun here was the statuette bust ( wife ) you had up, excuse my off the wall humor.

You only returned two comments for three. Thanks for those and keep writing.

BadBadBear cool smirk

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10-17-2009 at 11:45:27 PM

Re: Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

Yes, but of course i am. Figured my backwards humor fits the backwards world we know.

Thanks for all,
BBear cool smirk

10-18-2009 at 01:58:19 PM

Re: Friends and enemies o' mine, come forth.......

If you never had to use a outhouse, like I did, then you can't be too backwards. Well, so far none of my enemies have shown up.

Stay straight, Bear, in this mixed up world of ours.

rolleyes .................................................gogant

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.