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"YOU"Remember when you used to call on God |
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Re: "YOU"I've read this twice and both times I get the feeling that I'm reading a letter not a poem. Perhaps it's just me, but Maybe you could streamline it a bit. Not sure. Hope this helps you. |
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Re: "YOU"hoth2o...thank you for your input...and as soon as I read your reply I knew exactly what you meant...before writing this I had just writtn a two page letter to my child venting about how I felt...I guess I should have written it after I had calmed down a bit...sorry if I wasted your time. |
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Re: "YOU"Hello, Nanny...your words speak so hard, but yet there is a soft philosophy about it. Call it prose, poetry, or a read, it is nice...and I have Faith in my heart. |
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Re: "YOU"gogant...Thank you for you comments...I know sometimes I let my emotions play more of a part when it comes to my writings, I think I need to work on that... |
Poetry is what gets lost in translation.
Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.