the internet is down
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the internet is downthe internet is down |
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Re: the internet is downComical but real and to the point.....very likeable with the simplicity it a good read |
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Re: the internet is downfunny...the frustration we all share at such moments is there...may I suggest a companion poem about taking the damned pc for granted when it's up and running. Your abrupt ending when it comes back on even suggests such a response. |
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the internet is downthe internet is truly amazing - i kid you not - |
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Re: the internet is downOkay, not bad. We all can relate, which makes this really good. But the OVER-repetition makes the poem a little.. less, to me. Certain things I can understand repeating: "call the cable company" or "check the router, the modem too." The redundancy is usually a bad idea in any poem, so use it carefully. |
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the internet is downThanks I'll keep that in mind ! |
Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.
Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.